True Understanding.... Poem by Varsha M

True Understanding....

Rating: 5.0


Bound to time
Chained in space
Probably stable element
I the unstable stand aghast
Yet unclear amidst the clear
How to bridge this gap linear
Answer's the transcendence
That wins our life
Andfor generations, preserve
Even though in death, our body, elope
Soul remains free all the time
Free in the free space.
Exploring all aspects in time land
Where there is no fear and no terror
Just pleasure and pleasure abound.

True Understanding....
Sunday, October 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: concious,meditation,space,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Mahtab Bangalee poem elderly old and Deluke M Freedom and me poet yeps poet re- wireyourmind.
A little understanding of time and space makes massive change that totally makes life different. But fathoming this needs your patience and a helping friend to meter the journey till the end.
A typical Shakespearean sonnet if I remove second last line. But the essence of the line is eminent and I don't wish to remove it. So a twist to the original sonnet style.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 04 October 2020

This is pure magic! thanks for posting! 5 stars!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 October 2020

A wonderful competition! Appreciated and admired.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 October 2020

Free in the free space! ! ! ! Musing along with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 October 2020

A well thought poem. Truly excellent...5 stars*****

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2020

A fantastic poem with lovely ending: Where there is no fear and no terror...........Where the mind is without fear Gurdev Tagore Just pleasure and pleasure abound.

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