True Fate... Poem by Varsha M

True Fate...

Rating: 4.6


She thought she had power
Only to discover
Humility is above hour
Scribbling all that matter
Be it eleventh hour
Or the twelfth one sure
Life goes on, on one sound
Do good until last breath sound
You never know
You might be fulfilling angelic vow
Serving the poor and destitute
Whatever be my ultimate fate.

True fate is acquiring happiness
As you bring smile on other's faces.

True Fate...
Wednesday, August 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: good,power,powerful,serenity,service
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Joshua AG verses she thought she had power....life is not about power just humility makes things look more beautiful. When we serve others, the peace and joy is above all.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 12 August 2020

Happiness seeing the smile on others' faces.It a true happiness.A good message.

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Dipak adhya 12 August 2020

True fate is acquiring happiness As you bring smile on other's faces. Very commendable..... Good poem....

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Kevin Patrick 16 August 2020

wise thoughts from an expressive verse, the material may provide some comfort true happiness is simply the kindness of human decency to fellow humans. Marvelous verse

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 August 2020

A well penned heartwarming poem of the day. Simply superb. Congrats on your featured piece....10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 August 2020

An excellent poem with brilliant ending! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being featured today as Poem of the Day!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 May 2021

Beautiful thoughts on the joys of service and devotion. Exquisite!

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Captain Cur 21 March 2021

The proverbial light in the darkness! Excellent write. Power comes in many guises, a life of service is an empowering experience.

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Anjandev Roy 21 March 2021

Sublime piece.....like it....thank u...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 February 2021

Beautifully conveyed and crafted poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 February 2021

What a wonderful and meaningful message to humanity. The closure line says it all.

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