Treasure Unexplored Poem by Varsha M

Treasure Unexplored

Rating: 4.6


S to a mile
Turns it sublime
Ever since I stepped in here
With a smile on my face
Fathoming mountain more
Only because you accompany me.
Oh smile! O smile
I reverie your healing nudge
Wheeling my legs to pace
The uncovered locale
Ever since I stepped in here.

Treasure Unexplored
Saturday, June 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: smile,smiling,treasure
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the poem ' Add S to a mile = smile' of PPME on PH. Indeed tirious mile becomes joyous journey if smile mingles the mile.
Ph by Caroline Hernandez on unsplash.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 15 October 2020

sometimes a smile in a fleeting moment, can change a strangers emotions to happy in an instant, smiles pleasant can make a heart sing in appreciation

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2020

Oh lovely Nile! River Nile! ! Smile! ! ! ! While you bring joy to the world; Even a mile away. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Varsha M 20 June 2020

Thank-you sir for your beautiful words Nile and smile. Thank-you for admiring sir.

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Terry Craddock 26 October 2020

Happy Seed Swift Passing Moments sometimes a smile in a passing swift fleeting moment can change a strangers emotions to happy in an instant smiles pleasant can make a heart sing in appreciation Inspired by the poem 'Treasure Unexplored' by the poet Varsha Madhulika. Dedicated to the poet Varsha Madhulika.

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Bharati Nayak 20 June 2020

S to a mile Turns it sublime Ever since I stepped in here With a smile on my face Fathoming mountain more Only because you accompany me. Oh smile! O smile - - - - - - -A great poem.Wish smile gives us energy to walk miles.Congratulations for being selected Poem of the Day

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 June 2022

A lovely poem dear rain..... my pleasure revisiting it.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 October 2021

Having read this again, Fabulous Member Poem Of The Day from last year, I end reading this with a SMILE. It invites another smile, most beautifully created and worded. Truly marvelous POD. Still 5 Stars at the Fullest.

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Rebecca Navarre 04 July 2021

Oh, how beautifully sweet! .. Beautiful heart captured here! .. Beautifully inspiring! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 June 2021

Beautiful, lovelist said, a very impressive poem makes my heart be happy. So much enjoyed reading this.5 Stars!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 January 2021

A beautifully rendered verse which warms the heart and makes one smile.

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