What makes love great?
The tiny moments we dwelt.
The lingering drive we felt
And the longing we swelt.
Yes the love we cloth in
Pains a lot as it deepen
But still we long to don
Love that counts as fun.
Serious look of life
Would have no life
Had this nagging dive
Love always bribe.
As we walk along the path
Togetherness of the one dwelleth
For it's difficult to uncouth
The love that is worth.
How much ever war raged
In the battlefield of mind
Love alone can calm sound
For it always sees far beyond.
Even though love hurts
It rules over all with guts
'Cause of the human essence bursts
Until bond finally wert.
Love is life
Only if you dive
Not just for a jiff
But to live like a chief.
Mark my words, o listener
Love becomes ev'n more easier
As we entwine and merge there
Before eloping as united wire.
A beautiful poem that brings out the wonderful attributes of love. Beautifully crafted and mellifluous when read. Insightful write. Congratulations for a well deserved accolade.
Your imagery is so unique, powerful and beautiful! I just loved this, and the picture, too.
I love the way u write_ Please read a few of my poems as well like 'Consolation' and 'Brother in Arms' _I'm sure you will like it
Lingering drive is elastic of the tiny moment... profound poetic depth!
A beautiful creation, well articuated and nicely brought forth with conviction.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully crafted
Thank-you so much sir. It's really encouraging.