Not Always Straight Ways Are Right Poem by Varsha M

Not Always Straight Ways Are Right

Rating: 5.0


Tiptoeing like a curious child
across the waves of clouds
in the afternoon so proud
inviting me for a ride.

And I close my eyes
and sail across
the sea of ecstasy
meant only for me.

Calling out loud
in the voice of the God
perfectly timed out
in words that proclaimed

come let's be one
As a destined gun
Firing all the fun
Right under the sun.

Run we have won
as horizon dons
the clouds woven
as the wedding gown.

Ah! It's just bliss
no one wants to miss
as we finally kiss
without any hiss.

Please be with us
For another buzz
In the lawn of pulse
Awaiting surprise calls.

© Varsha Madhulika
18.07.2021

Not Always Straight Ways Are Right
Sunday, July 18, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: ways,surprise,surreal,happiness,cloud
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the poem poetic vision of Sylvia FC. Something walking straight might lead you to nowhere. Taking a turn always guides to back on track which is always awaiting your start. Photo courtesy to the owner.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 18 July 2021

Road not taken always remains a mystery, Well written poem,5*****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 July 2021

1) Not Always Straight Ways Are Right So TRUE, dear Varsha. This sweet, lovely and most beautiful poem, touched me a very very lot.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 July 2021

2) I have the giglles since your end rhymes are so fascinatingly put..........OOPS! You were inspired by my new poem POETIC VISION? How adorable is that, I feel deeply honoured and flattered, thank you so much dear, you are oft so near (at my newest poems)

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 July 2021

Beautiful and passionate BRAVO! ! ! !

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Nastasimir Franovic 30 May 2023

Great poem. Wonderful rhymes

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 January 2022

Top score for the pic. But PoemHunter allows only one vote😀

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 January 2022

A gem of a poem. Brilliant imagery: " sail across the sea of ecstasy meant only for me."…enjoyed. Top score

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Varsha M 31 May 2023

Your words are encouraging

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

Lovely lovely words created by a lovely poetic mind! ! 5 stars and a fav

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

now that is the way to start a poem! ! ! Tiptoeing like a curious child across the waves of clouds

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