~the Quiet Voice~ Poem by Lilly Mystic

~the Quiet Voice~

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into the mist I traveled
losing myself in reverie
coming upon my soul I thought lost

there it was shining
like a bright copper sundial
pointing me the way home

calling to me from deep within
a small quiet voice
that I barely recognized

telling me the path ahead perilous
watch your footing in the wastelands
where the vultures circle and pick

madness a real foe
loneliness a reality
frailty my covering

peeking through the misty darkness
came the sun's rays
caressing my soul gently

calling to me with it's tender lilting whisper
come child and find your rest here
let go of your fear and find peace

walk out of the desert and into the lush forests
drink at the stream and be replenished
lay down on the mossy beds of enlightenment

free yourself today
from the constraints of yesterday
as your third eye eases open

witnessing the wonders of a new day
rest now you've traveled long and hard
meditate on the vast oceans

as you walk homeward listening to the whispers
of an inner child long locked away
pick up the pieces of yourself you've lost along the way

come home

~the Quiet Voice~
Saturday, September 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 05 September 2016

Has a soothing oriental touch, of sandal rose and flowing veils that gently touch. After dangerous darkness comes the light, dissipating fright, making things right. The whole composition is beautifully conceived, superb imagery open the way to an optimistic, well ending conclusion. Very nice!

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Brenda Jensen 06 September 2016

thank you graciously Sandra you made me smile today :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

Caressing my soul! Nice work.

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Brenda Jensen 06 September 2016

thank you for such a kind comment

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Kelly Kurt 03 September 2016

A nicely penned piece, Lilly. Thanks

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Brenda Jensen 04 September 2016

thank you most kindly Kelly..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 September 2016

A beautifully envisioned poem with the base of spirituality reflecting struggle of the soul to attain salvation. Thanks for sharing.

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Brenda Jensen 04 September 2016

thank you most graciously Ratnakar

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