Burning wick of candle
Never gives up its challenge
Fights until last thread burn
Tearing the darkness goes down.
Right there amidst all odd
A meager hope raises hood
Very like a small desire that coo
Meticulous vibes in dreams aknew.
Building castle brilliant
On the fire so very hot
Igniting lucious desire
On foundation disguise.
Submissively she lay there
Trusting all his fallacy utter
Not because she was fool
So that his faith on love never fall.
Never ever in history, it repeat
To witness love so very true in it
Laid her whole life she preserved
To conserve his life as he paved.
Satisfying all his demands
Never she uttered a word
Never expecting any name
Just made him comfortable.
Day after day as time passed
Not even one page got turned
But she never gave up on her love
Though he gained strength and gone.
Sometimes such had truth's too come
Accept them all believe he didn't deserve
Raise your self worth right up in admiration
You are no more slave but a free commission.
Burning wick of candle / Never gives up its challenge Fights until last thread burn / Tearing the darkness goes down. Thanks for this brilliant composition which points towards the state of our society especially with regard to young women. You have started well aided by an amazing metaphor. My sincere thanks.
Yeah life of fairer is difficult and they need to adjust to the challenging situation all the time.10++ Satisfying all his demands Never she uttered a word Never expecting any name Just made him comfortable.
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An amazing poem that expresses the painful feelings of a heartbreak and yet giving strength to stand up and move on without blaming oneself for loving somebody who does not deserve it