Raw Or Ripe Seed what You Sow Matters Poem by Varsha M

Raw Or Ripe Seed what You Sow Matters

Rating: 5.0


Like a wave on oceanic floor
My mind too is like an open shore.

Time now and then, it's visited
By waves of thoughts profound.

Like a child empty of thoughts
Nurture egocentrism in roots,

I house a tree of life, full of experience seen
Bearing leaves that're elegant green,

Some big, some small as I see
But all serve to complete and make me,

Likewise, a commotion on sandy shore in temple
Scrutiny every thought that kiss it's floor as a sample,

Filtering in the light of wisdom
Discussion at times, random

Clearing misconception born
Enlightening truths known.

Know this o dear man
It's hea'en, to be a thought swain.

Imagine a ground, off its crop
So is life, if your thoughts don't pop.

What if you're thoughts, take leave
Where will you get response to seive.

Thought bumble in brain, rumble
To solve the puzzle that crumble.

It's this house of thoughts tussle
That defines me as a living miniscule.

Raw or ripe seeds, what you sow dear
Matters a lot when time to germinate near.

Raw seeds putrefy in immaturity
Ripe seeds germinate in congruity.

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Raw Or Ripe Seed
what You Sow Matters
Monday, February 22, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: random thoughts,thought,life,being free,being different
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The thought reigns. Mightier than sword they cheisle our very existence. If unguarded ruin our whole life, if eisely incorporated bless our life. Thoughts are what we actually become. Skeptic or stoic. Freeman or bounded prisoner. These lines I wanted to rearrange as the poem. But then a new thought stroke my grey matter and I wrote it differently. Inspired by poem of mamutty CHOLA poem we are what we think. Photo courtesy Samuel Scrimshaw on unsplash.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 February 2021

Wisdom abounds in this elegant and alluring verse.

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Captain Cur 23 February 2021

Great ending lines to this thought provoking write!

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M Asim Nehal 23 February 2021

Excellent poem, very thoughtful. Deserves full stars.

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Kostas Lagos 23 February 2021

Fabulous poem Varsha. Just great

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 February 2021

Wonderful and perceptive thoughts imbued with insight. Great to ponder about. A well expressed and crafted write.

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