Wife's Retaliation.... Poem by Varsha M

Wife's Retaliation....

Rating: 4.8


No woman in love
With her hubby
Ever choose to say
I can't wait for thee
For she knows a fiery voice of her
Breaks her robust hubby
Though he never shows it
But even then she understands and respect
And even though she can do many things
Choose to be submissive to him
Respecting his masculinity.

Feminity if her is just enough
To tantalize like a toy of choice
But still she sticks to the one
Believing him to be her old man
Knowing even a minute streak of misconception
Shatters the trust build over the years
And also she very well knows
The boundaries in a married life
Counts above all the investment done
Tall in her wise thoughts, she nurture
Complements every step of her mister.

Don't ever put your wife in such situation
Where she happens to make a big mistake, then
Don't blame her that she had unfaithful intentions
For she too is a being with flesh and blood fabrications
And must have broken in the dearth of support she need
But had nothing but haunting eyes that label her as bad.

Wife's Retaliation....
Wednesday, October 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,wife
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The opening lines are from the poem woman by me poet yeps poet. Though he ended his poem on positive notes, these lines caught my eyes and I penned it in praise of every wife who never utter a word not because they cannot but only to let the life bloom and flourish. A word of harshness and an I'll insult is just enough to spark the process of ruin. I wanted to use this image for my this 499th poem
Photo courtesy pinterest.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 28 October 2020

Marriage is a balancing act of two people on a wire, they must work together or fall to doom. I see it as a game of suffering.

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Hannatu Adamu 28 October 2020

After all, she is of the fairer!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 28 October 2020

A wise and beautifully written verse. Congratulations on Poem of the Day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2020

Don't ever put your wife in such situation Where she happens to make a big mistake, then Don't blame her that she had unfaithful intentions/// beautiful poem penned on the human understanding, specially woman when she becomes wife; yes if we, the masculine gender loves a feminine gender, we need to understand them, the feminine gender; yes, they have also rights to live independently; but for our misunderstanding we can't blame them as unfaithful!

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2020

Wife's Retaliation/// congrats for being selected this beautiful ode as POD.......from me 5***** /// beautiful crystal watery iamge

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Susan Williams 28 August 2022

But had nothing but haunting eyes that label her as bad.---- this poem is powerful in its impact---a five star poem for all to read

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

waow _ you should be celebrated for this piece _ it should be used in marriage seminars so inspiring and educational. Please do consider reading a few of mine like 'Power of Surrender'

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Varsha M 25 May 2021

Thank-you Indira ma'am for your wonderful review. It's really encouraging.

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Indira Renganathan 25 May 2021

Very wonderful write....excellently remarkable poem...no one will disagree with what you have said.....inspiring...5*****

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M Asim Nehal 21 April 2021

Yes if pushed against the wall such retaliation is bound to bounce back. You dealt the subject very sensibly and conveyed the message perfectly.5***

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