Pain Of Separation Poem by Varsha M

Pain Of Separation

Rating: 5.0


I know how it feels
To fall apart
From the integral part
I nurtured.

Devastated it seems
Scattered in part
Losing my right
As a human being.

Shattered I stand
With no one to share
The agony I bore
Crushing me every hour.

Giving to others
Have robbed myself
Left nothing to shower
Just a body with few more breaths.

Thursday, July 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,painful,separation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Pain of separation is too much but analogy is that there is no dear one to listen your part.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2020

Another wonderful poem Varsha...The last stanza carries power.....10

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M Asim Nehal 30 July 2020

I believe that pain emerges strong when we are alone with our thoughts. A thoughtful poem.10

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Sharad Bhatia 30 July 2020

Such a beautiful and heart touching poem about " separation" . It is very difficult to everyone, Thankyou very much for sharing Rated 10++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 October 2021

Shattered I stand With no one to share The agony I bore Crushing me every hour.....painful utterances! !

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Date & Time: 7/30/2020 7: 47: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58870503 - Separation-Human Curse Member: Varsha M Comment: Yes a permanent scar on heart which people will say as fate. True Sir.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 July 2020

Pain of separation More than pain of fire burning Cause this wound lives inside

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Dipak adhya 30 July 2020

Separation itself is a painful thougt.... But one has to face it often.... A beautiful creation... But it hurts... It hurts the readers.. with poetic beauty and aching joy.

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so sad.. human tragedy.. loved but missed too.. good 10 Separation-Human curse Thursday,30th July 2020 Life may not be the same again only to witness anguish and pain there shall be a permanent scar on the heart which people shall call as fate on human's part Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

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