Wish You Were Here Poem by Yiyan Han

Wish You Were Here

Rating: 5.0


- Heartfelt song lyrics, by Yiyan Han (c)2020-11-24

When I'm alone
my feeling's strong

Heard you say
don't carry away
But I can't help it
'cause my sleepless mind

When I'm alone
my feeling is strong

I'm despair
as you don't care
But I can't help it
'cause my longing mind

Wish you were here
when I'm alone

When I'm alone
my feeling's strong

When I'm alone
my feeling's strong

Wish You Were Here
Thursday, November 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: emotional,feelings,heartfelt,longing,love and friendship,lyrics,songs of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This piece is a heartfelt one with deep emotions. Will some one make it to Top of the Pops? Yeah, come on! Will Celine Dion, Katherine Jenkins, Jackie Evancho, Josh Daniel, or Ronan Keating be interested in taking it on?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 26 November 2020

Beautifully written song. Indeed heartfelt. Thank-you.

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Kostas Lagos 26 November 2020

If I was a musician I would made that a hit!

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 December 2020

A nice song indeed. Loved the way you have expressed the feeling of loneliness. Thanks for sharing.

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Mihaela Pirjol 01 December 2020

I think, I have forgotten to mention that I was referring to David Gilmour: the member of the famous progressive-rock band, 'Pink Floyd'.

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Yiyan Han 01 December 2020

Thank you very much, Mihaela, for your recommendation and your liking of my little piece :)

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Mihaela Pirjol 01 December 2020

Pink Floyd...! He creates magic with his guitar! But, of course, there is Polly Samson (his wife) which composes the lyrics. Your lyrics are emotionally touching; I hope one day, you will find a musical composer for a wonderful collaboration!

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Anjandev Roy 27 November 2020

Sublime piece....like it........thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 November 2020

A beautiful song that expresses the longings of the heart. When we are alone, it makes us vulnerable and we seek solace. A well crafted and expressed write.

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Yiyan Han 28 November 2020

Thank you, Rose Marie, for your encouragement. The heart desires beloved ones at times of loneliness, more so in this very year 2020 for many.

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