Translucent Thoughts Poem by Melati Hussein

Translucent Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


If only your thoughts were as translucent as my soul
My being has become a museum
A contemporary collection
Although my memories have not been catalogued well

Having spoken to you
You have become both nearer and further away
Waiting to see you
Hoping to see you
It's a fool's game

I still harbour a kiss
My lips are primed
And perhaps unable to obey the metal of my mind

Will you perceive all of this the moment our eyes meet?
There is no veil for a translucent soul.

I'm calm
And you said you are as well

Wednesday, December 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love,soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 30 December 2015

Nice poetry on lost love and portraying oneself as a museum..rated 10+

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Terry Craddock 30 December 2015

'If only your thoughts were as translucent as my soul My being has become a museum A contemporary collection Although my memories have not been catalogued well' from the first line, the first stanza, I loved your poem, rushed to vote ten, the first vote, before many read, appreciate this gem

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