Time To Correct Poem by Varsha M

Time To Correct

Rating: 5.0


A very crude but vital
Element of life sprout
As I sat embracing
My loneliness.

As I dived, deep deep down
Into my unconscious psyche
Covered with the dust of past
For ages immemorial together.

Pages unturned, yelled aloud
In tone unbearable anymore
Narrations resonating like echoes
Of unheard voices, that seeked help.

Amidst this gloomy journey
The soul cleanses through all guilts
For which it had no time in the past
But now the load of baggage is worse.

Spending time for self is a treasure
Only those prefer, who knows its pleasure.

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Time To Correct
Friday, February 12, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: pleasure,psychology,self help,inner voice
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wanted to pen for a comment on my poem something things happen. But when I say to write this retrospective cleansing was born. This poem too seems good.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 14 February 2021

A beautiful poem indeed. Loved reading it.

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Captain Cur 13 February 2021

A beautiful write! That warm and distant light leading us back home, to the inner sanctum of the soul.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 February 2021

I ❤️the picture of the lamp with the sun in it. If I may say, this is derived being inspired by your own latest poem. Marvelous! God's Rich Blessings for you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 February 2021

Magnificently thought, Varsha 5 Stars for the amazing poem stunningly said❤️

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