Therapeutic Vibe... Poem by Varsha M

Therapeutic Vibe...

Rating: 5.0


What if I get wet
Never mind it
Dance to the fullest
For its my pleasure tour
And my melody tune
Mingling under heaven
Like one human being
How I long to be like this
In the stance of merriment
Enjoying the freeing dance element
How I long to be this elegant
Missing nothing what is meant
To be my sublime content
Not as two distinct being
But an inseparable thing
How I long to be united like this
Both having you in me
And the very me in you
Now and forever, always.

Therapeutic Vibe...
Thursday, November 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: art,dance,rain,therapy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Kesav Venkat Eswaran poem A snippet of the sunny song.
In the quest of achieving we have forgotten the therapeutic power of rain, the art therapy that calms us and dance therapy that makes us feel more better.
Photo courtesy Allen Taylor on unsplash.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 22 November 2020

A well crafted poem. Truly delightful and fascinating....5 stars*****

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Rajnish Manga 20 November 2020

Both having you in me And the very me in you Now and forever, always.... //.... It reminds me of Hazrat Amir Khusrau and one of his verses: मन तू शुदम, तू मन शुदी / मन जां शुदम, तू तन शुदी / ता कस ना गोयद बाद अजीं, मन दीगरम तन दीगरी (I have become you, you have become me; I have become life, you have become body. From now on, let no one say that I am other and you are another) .

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Dipak Adhya 19 November 2020

As usual the picture is very enjoyable. The verse alsi fine...as you always write...

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Kostas Lagos 19 November 2020

Slpendid! Thumbs up Varsha!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 19 November 2020

Lovely. The monsoons will be there soon as the next moon. Just go outside and get soaked to the bone

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