The Soulmate Poem by Bisy Untan

The Soulmate

Rating: 5.0


First I saw you in that morn
On the bony unknown winter branch
Decked with pearly feathery drops
That glittered in the golden light.

Your rusty chest of tiny plumes
Was a fervent flame to snowy doom
In the silent unknown lonely gloom
I called you to my inner room.

Day by day you came and sang
A chorus with your reddish gang
Threw me mirth to dusty light
Where I laid with gloomy eyes.

Once you chirped me in my despair
'Who cursed you out with weird pooh! '
I sensed it out and saw you there
With many a berries in your beak.

She dropped the rubies down and sang
Soothing melodies to my heart
In my soul I bore it long
Still I hear it in my gloom.

I don't know who guided me
To such a distance to meet you sole
Still I believe some unknown Web
Binds us together in this birth!

The Soulmate
Sunday, October 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: soul mate
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A singing bird in the winter outside became my soul mate away from home.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 22 October 2016

This is a well-rhymed beautiful poem. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. (10)

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Bisy Untan 27 October 2016

Thank you, Sir.

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 October 2016

birds, flowers and plants tugging sounds of trees cool breeze and squirrels tuned nature wild and live

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Valsa George 21 October 2016

This is beautiful.....! Even a lovely bird can turn up as a soulmate!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 November 2022

Day by day you came and sang A chorus with your reddish gang Threw me mirth to dusty light Where I laid with gloomy eyes.......magnificent. An excellent poem.

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Chinedu Dike 21 December 2019

Amazing eloquence and emotions. Very powerfully and movingly penned. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

beautiful poem penned /// spring is here in this soul the song of love wins the whole the tailor bird comes and go for the soulmate everything is true………...///

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Bisy Untan 01 March 2019

Thank you Mahtab Bangalee. Your four lines really spreads a carpet of spring to my soulmate.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 October 2017

A fabulous poem..Lovely narrative feel. I loved reading it..10

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2016

Lonely gloom. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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