A Dream Poem by Bisy Untan

A Dream

Rating: 5.0


Vision was bigger than the eyes
The reverberations were softer than to my ears
The incense was sharper than to smell
The speeches were too sweet to taste
The wind was so violent that I cannot feel
All these layer by layer, petal by petal folded into a bud
And sank somewhere between the depth of heart and mind

I searched for it in the depth and found it
In between two breaths of my sleep and dream
At the timeless corner of tranquility
Flotting as a colourful blossom.

Thursday, November 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Its only a day dream.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 10 November 2017

An excellent poem expressing delicate poetic imagination ... magnificently penned..10

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Bisy Untan 11 November 2017

Thank you for the encouragement.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2017

Dream is amazing. Vision is greater than thought. Wise sharing is done.10

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Bisy Untan 11 November 2017

Thank you for the inspiring comment.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 March 2022

A great poem dear poetess....loved it

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 May 2019

beautiful poem; especially superb the last stanza

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 February 2018

An amazing little poem! Sparkling poetic expression! My favorite lines: I searched for it in the depth and found it In between two breaths of my sleep and dream/At the timeless corner of tranquility/Flotting as a colourful blossom.......I would love to find and read many of your poems in days ahead!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 08 February 2018

Oh, that has some beautiful Vedanta in it. Although not this poetic, I would like you to read my poem He on my page here. Thanks in advance. (10)

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Sekharan Pookkat 15 November 2017

dreams are sweet to smile soft to feel and swift to think

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Bisy Untan

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Kerala, India
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