A Treasure In My Soul Poem by Bisy Untan

A Treasure In My Soul

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The scutcheon on my door
Is your peaceful heavenly smile
I carved it on my door
To lock the sorrows inside.

I plead you, not to ask for the key,
As I missed it on a thespian escape!
The scuttle on my head is full of rose
From the garden of Scylla of the Pacific.

Through the spectacles on your nose
Don't speck on my rose
This spectacular sight is for me alone
A treasure to the sanctum of my soul! !

Tuesday, October 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: experience
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's not possible to share all our feelings with everybody.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 25 October 2017

The scuttle on my head is full of rose From the garden of Scylla of the Pacific. -Fascinating..I enjoyed your poem

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Bisy Untan 28 October 2017

Thank You Dr.Dillip for your kind encouragement.

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A poetic magic.. fascinating

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Chinedu Dike 21 December 2019

An insightful piece of poetry written from the conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, madam.

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 March 2019

Wonderful and inspiring Beautiful and blooming Skilful creation. My congrats... ADD MY TEN PLUS

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Bisy Untan 02 March 2019

Thank you for the blessings.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

wonderful expression - Through the spectacles on your nose Don't speck on my rose// yeah -its not possible to share our feelings with everybody

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Bisy Untan 01 March 2019

Sometimes, it becomes impossible when words fail before the strong rush in the mind.

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Indira Renganathan 22 October 2018

Your note says the truth...but whatever you have expressed here carries a complete wholesomeness of love...a splendid work....100

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Bisy Untan 22 October 2018

Thank you mam for you kind inspiring comment.

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