The Mouse. Poem by Gurleen kaur Narang

The Mouse.

Rating: 5.0


There lived a fluffy mouse,
in a dusty terrible house.
Showing his cute white teeth,
He was holding something underneath.

He walked from shoe to shoe very fast,
and brought home some cheese at last!
His white fur shined under the light,
He could walk so fast and fight.
His eyes were so sweet and innocent,
Were magnificent like 'the moon crescent'.

Wonder why women
On seeing this creature run fast,
For his sweetness
Melts my 'heart-hard'.

Tuesday, June 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: animals,mouse
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem beautifully describes 'the mouse' that entered my house at around midnight when I was struggling hard to sleep.He was a fluffy, breathtaking white mouse.He entered the kitchen before I could jump out of my bed.Then came the sounds from the kitchen that were clear enough to tell me 'he was hungry'.I didn't mean to interrupt his search for food.So I remained in my bed and planned to write about this magnificent creature in the morning.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 18 July 2017

Well I had a mouse in my house once, a very cheeky mouse who didn't mind if I saw him or not and seemed to be laughing and chuckling at me so I bought a mouse trap and trapped the critter, only to let him out in the field again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2017

Being inspired by a mouse's disturbance to sleep at night you have painted a nice and heart touching poem regarding its character. Let me quote some.. He walked from shoe to shoe very fast, and brought home some cheese at last! His white fur shined under the light, He could walk so fast and fight. His eyes were so sweet and innocent, Were magnificent like 'the moon crescent'. Thanks for sharing.

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I am glad you loved my poem.Thanks for reading and appreciating, Mr.Kumarmani!

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Tom Allport 28 June 2017

a nice descriptive poem of an event that happened late at night which inspired you to write? ..........well written.

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Thanks for reading my poem! I am glad you loved it.

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