Random Thoughts Poem by Gurleen kaur Narang
Random Thoughts
The world is beautiful,
But my vision isn't.
The weather is good,
But my mood isn't.
Totally helpless,
I cry, I cry, I cry..........
If happiness were sold in a shop,
I would buy!
In this hustle & bustle,
Silently, I weep;
In my little world,
Happiness seldom creeps.
All I want is
Talk to someone who understands me,
My doubts & queries
Are as deep as sea.
All I urge is,
Travel To A place unknown,
Where mind is free
& thoughts all vibrant are born!
When despair looms into my view,
And dearest dreams seem blighted,
I write a poem,
My spirit once again is ignited!
That's a beautiful poem. It let me know you are going through all that young people go through and I'm so glad you think the world is a beautiful place, let's keep it beautiful by our kindness to each other......
Yeah, the world is surely beautiful but our prospective and conditions sometimes blur our vision.Thanks for your valuable observation on my poem.Your comment will be treasured.
Yeah, writing refreshes our mind and rejuvenates our soul.thanks for the appreciation.I am glad you loved my poem.
My dear Gurleen, you have painted this poem in a deepest ideology. World is beautiful but our vision isn't. Different persons have different views as per their dreams, as per their situations or as per their mental outlook. However truthfulness and nonviolence bring peace and free mind and free mind brings happiness and prace. It can't be bought in the market as you have depicted gorgeously to be quoted... If happiness were sold in a shop, I would buy! Thanks for best presentation...10
It really gave an immense satisfaction to know that you loved my poem! When the reader understands exactly what the poet wants to convey, the poet is on the top of the world.thanks for your feedback sir!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 10:05:21 PM # 1.0.0.1119
well penned! keep writing
Thank you for the appreciation and I will definitely keep on writing!