Maturing as I advance further
Dreams within my soul flair
Opening its giant wings there.
Donning in the shy girlish look
I too dream to meet Robin cook
On his knee, with a ring betook.
Up into his arms as a free soul
With an exotic sambuk waiting a sail
Away into the ocean of hope anew full.
The glitter of ring magnified further
The more we venture into ocean fair
Rooting me to trust even the more.
How the pinch of love mingle
Surpass the upper story above
But work miracles all the more.
The very ring of yours made it
Showering flowers in garden barren fit
As life pause to embrace all of it.
The ring in the ring you gave
Made me marvel my life whole
Believing even more on dreams and desire.
Be it covenant ring or a phone ring
Message conveyed is the true hamstring
Transcending like the most cherished being.
Indeed a ring can make it happen
Coo all the volumes unspoken
Yet perceived like a golden boon.
A well written poem. Truly magnificent...5 stars*****
The Ring Made all the difference Changed life to marvel Wonderful poem
The ring in the ring you gave Made me marvel my life whole Believing even more on dreams and desire. /// wow the ring makes a dream and desire the shining future life; excellent poem on the tercet form
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The ring in the ring you gave Be it covenant ring or a phone ring Transcending like the most cherished being.... //.... Yes, a ring can make it happen. Romantic sentiments expressed beautifully with a handful of nature poured onto it. Makes an interesting reading. Thanks for sharing.