Rhyming Treat.. Poem by Varsha M

Rhyming Treat..

Rating: 5.0


Rain is there to wet
And I caught in net
In the world of met
With my lost bet
Walking like pet
For it looks set
And I felt get
The very jet
Well knit
In kit
Bright.

Rhyming Treat..
Friday, December 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,feelings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by rhyming of kostos logos poem rain is falling.

The theme is that we all fall in such plases where we make mistakes but still try because that's life and that is what is swon by love to never fail but to bloom and shine bright again.

First version here:

There was wet
Caught in the net
In the world he met
His only lost bet
Walking like hit
For it looks set.



Second version is as follows

Rain is there to wet
And I caught in net
In the world of met
With my lost bet
Walking like pet
For it looks set
And I felt get
Every treat
I dreamt
Yet.

This is my 600th poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 December 2020

Congratulations dear Varsha! Happy you reached the 600th poem with such rapidity. I too, reached my 600th poem. But only yesterday! I am like a tortoise..... :) Like Dr Dillip ji has written, i would like to endorse that it is a sweet and cute poem, full of rhyme and rhythm. Thank you so much for all your lovely comments on my poems. Five stars!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 December 2020

Congratulations for your 600th poem submitted to PH. This is cute little poem with rhyme and rhythm with a beautiful picture! Loved reading it..5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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