Purest At The Soul..... Poem by Naila Rais

Can't make you glow... in one verse at the last you tell it all. a great philosophy of love and innocence and simplicity.. tony

how truthfully you show but they seem to alone glow cars rides show well done to you also in poetry you alone will GLOW

Pretty clothes, priceless ornaments Can't make your soul glow... Such a great truth dear Naila. tony

Very true, Naila Rais, but the so-called civil we always hide feelings and wear masks. A lovely poem, full marks.

I too like correction only if it's true, the original arrangement of can't make you glow works just fine. Just like the light shining it already applies itself to the inner being or soul. Of course it's my opinion just the same as the correction was Bri Edwards. Very nice poem 10+

very well written miss naila.....we need purity in our soul... nothing else matters...great job....a big 10...keep it up

(cont.) **i don't need to know your answer, but if you want me to know, send a message, as i rarely return to a poem page after i finish commenting. Can't make you glow... your meaning is NOT CLEAR, with these words. how about Can't make your soul (or personality) glow? ? bri ;)