I Go On Forever... Poem by Naila Rais

I Go On Forever...

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Life goes tough, roads seem rough,
I went, I go, I go on forever....

The boats sails, the idea fails,
I tried, I try, I try on forever....

Eyes filled with tear, no one to hear,
I cried, I cry, I cry on forever....

When troubles fear, came a lovely dear,
I laughed, I laugh, I laugh on forever....

I compromise, to keep my promise,
I made, I make, I make on forever....

Society full of myth, I never agree with,
I broke, I break, I break on forever....

I love you, you love me,
I thought, I think, I think on forever....

I bear pain, why pain always rain,
I beared, I bear, I bear on forever....

The mountains shine, the opportunities line,
I jump, I jumped, I jumped on forever....

I want to loose fur, as it never lure,
I threw, I throw, I throw on forever....

The eyes closed, the breathing slows,
I live, I died, I died for forever....

I Go On Forever...
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thoughts that struck.... Reality of me....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 April 2018

You have got a good start with sad poems, from so tender an age. We generally hope our kids to be happy and healthy with dreams and desires. Wish some of the blissful moment come by you too.

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Naila Rais 01 April 2018

Thanks.... May your dreams come true..... Naila

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Banamala Sen 08 April 2018

Lovely expression of your thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

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Prabir Gayen 02 April 2019

Very beautiful poem....awesome..... thanks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 February 2019

you read so many of my poems today but did not comment ON any O what a dismay NR

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Naila Rais 17 February 2019

Nothing.....What I can write for it....

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 January 2019

When troubles fear, came a lovely dear, I laughed, I laugh, I laugh on forever.... tears, sorrow, laughter. meditating on the end.........very emotional. very effective...... thank u dear poetess. tony

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Adiela Akoo 28 November 2018

Very creative approach

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 September 2018

you seemingly have some unique creativity about you you go go on for ever all will know who you are for ever and ever beware this world is a dangerous place trust no one no disappointment will ever you trace live life with grace at home place sweetest place rouges abound love resound and then it becomes a fall from grace keep safe

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Naila Rais 26 September 2018

Kkkkkk Naila......

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