Display Poem by Alam Sayed

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Prides of puny peacocks were in their foolish display,
Some intelligent pigs were fixing their bureaucratic ties,
When diseases cause infection inside the core of earth,
When history lies before you like a corpse.

Monday, May 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: bureaucracy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 07 May 2018

Dear Alam, such a profound write.....10++++

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Alam Sayed 08 May 2018

Dear Bernard, thanks for your inspiring comment.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Alam S. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bri Edwards 02 January 2019

i didn't get this, but from the 'topic' i deduce you are dissing/dising politicians. ? bri (:

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Spellbinding poem that bites at bureaucracy. Intelligently penned. Bad bureaucracy must be abhorred.10

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 May 2018

A powerful poem on bureaucracy.

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Alam Sayed 21 May 2018

I appreciate your visit and the comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2018

So beautifully inscribed on bureaucracy. The beginning is much touching. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Alam Sayed 15 May 2018

Thanks for your fair comment.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Alam S. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thanks

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