A Rainy Melody (Haiku) Poem by Vaibhav Simha

A Rainy Melody (Haiku)

Rating: 4.5


I hear melody
As rain blusters against ears,
Scuttling to the earth.

Tuesday, April 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 02 June 2020

Brilliant work.....thank u. anjandev roy.

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Valsa George 29 April 2020

Lovely Haiku......! I think you are experimenting with haiku for the first time....! Still so perfect and imaginative. As you are a perfectionist, I would prefer 'earth' or 'mud' instead of 'dust'! Top marks!

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Vaibhav Simha 29 April 2020

Thinking now, 'earth' sounds better. Thanks.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 April 2020

beautiful haiku on raining rhythm

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