Where Great Men Walked Poem by Michael Ordia

Where Great Men Walked

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Through the darkness
Through the dancing flame
When faith was madness
In this drenching rain
When failure seemed supreme
And mocking faces orbit
When hope seemed unreal
With things hardwork vomit.
This is where great men walked.

Through trials and many attempts
Through hardwork that never relent
Through sleepless nights and frustration
Their vision led by determination
When faith begins to wobble
Seek hope from the Almighty
Great hope they all gobble,
Strength to keep fighting
This is where great men walked.

Behold! A child is born
The reward of such great labour
Greatness with it core
The world bows with its favour
Then history is written
His greatness; this is the beginning.
This is where great men walked.

Where Great Men Walked
Monday, December 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,endurance,faith,greatness,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 January 2018

Write comment. Nice imagination, Ordia. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 December 2017

When hope seemed unreal With things hardwork vomit. This is where great men walked. so many images like dancing flame, great determination, supreme, failure, we get a lot of positive notes from your poem. come what may we have to struggle become great....... thank you for empowering us...... tony

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