When Someone Understands.. Poem by Varsha M

When Someone Understands..

Rating: 5.0


Laboring under the bright light
Amber sun changing azure sky
Nothing seemed to bring delight.

Visiting a dear one felt cool
Socializing made me look great
But within me, I miss something still.

Over the time one day under sunny weather
Someone admired my most little effort
Why this strange acknowledgement for me here.

Pouring positive vibes ever missing
Suddenly life becomes meaningful
When someone understands adds blessing.

Even the lost hope rejuvenates
Day and night seem alike
When someone really understands.

Meaning of life changes
Even flow of breeze reverse
When someone understands.

Tuesday, November 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: understanding
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I feel understanding is key to all. We make wrong choices because we fail to understand. We become wise because we understood and responded well.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2020

Optimism, hope, recognition. Beautifully written soliloquy, Varsha. Nice diction.5 stars

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Rajnish Manga 18 November 2020

....lost hope rejuvenates / Meaning of life changes Even flow of breeze reverse / When someone understands Hugely sensible and closer to the reality of life and human psychology. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece of writing.

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Kim Barney 17 November 2020

Much wisdom in both the poem and the poet notes!

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