When I Was Young Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

When I Was Young

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When i was young my dad was very strict
He didn't want me to be a thug in the street
My father taught me the importance of time keeping
The bad side of lying to get out of situations by fiddling

He didn't want me to be a thug in the street
When i was young my father was never thrifty
My father taught me the importance of time keeping
The good side of keeping my word without quibbling

When i was young my father was never thrifty,
Or, the bad side of lying to get out of situations by fiddling
But, the good side of keeping my word without quibbling.
When i was young my dad was very strict

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Lovely tribute to a father who teaches his children to be worthy in life

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 March 2021

A great poem! Congrats! !

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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 March 2021

Aye aye Captain. Indeed we do. Thanks for casting your anchor here.

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Captain Cur 24 March 2021

Lesson's learned by a wise father in well articulated repetitious lines, do we not all learn by repetition? As long as we are repeating what is right!

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