Venice Beach Poem by Ravi Kopra

Venice Beach

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Why has the whole of love come to me suddenly.
I see you with me on the Venice beach
walking hand in hand in the evening
watching the sun go beyond the horizon.
We see a plump lady in a blue bikini.
I too have curves you turn your face and say
Stop looking at her
I am with you
Look at me!
I smile, you smile
under the net of kisses.
We lay there on the beach, intertwined
till the full moon arises in the East.

Saturday, October 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 12 October 2017

Excellent portrayal of shades of human relationships. Thanks.

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Ravi Kopra 13 October 2017

You're welcome.

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Lamar Cole 08 October 2017

Very nice poem about Venice Beach.

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Ravi Kopra 12 October 2017

thank you, Lamar.

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