Till The Day I Rest Poem by April DOWN

Till The Day I Rest

Rating: 5.0


My vocal chords are raw
As I called for you in song
The weakened voice my flaw
Perhaps all along I was wrong

There is a choker around my neck
I guess I now symbolise my ancestors
Slowly I am dissolving into a wreck
The hideous pain and petulance festers

The nights when I am alive
It bares witness to my entirety
In the early hours I feel my drive
I can sense in the stars the divinity

By day I am false, locked in pretence
The stricken smiles, wide enough to bare my teeth
Emotionally driven I hide that I have lost all sense
Until the day I lay beneath my wreath

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S. Wesley Mcgranor 16 February 2021

Cute and enduring is this you.

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Varsha M 05 February 2021

Slowly I am dissolving into a wreck The hideous pain and petulance festers...this condition is the worst. To seem to be free yet encaptivated within unable to loosen the chains so crippling, killing me within every time i lie again serving the dark dungeon. A very saddest state one has.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 05 February 2021

Lovely dark poem, rhyming, priming, timing for killer punch...the last line, the refrain of the poem. Excellent all round.

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