It was your sweet smile,
and the twinkle in your eyes,
that captured my heart
Dear kabayang Nudershada, such a lovely senryu....10++++++
Another stunning senryu Nudershada Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
Very, very sweet, A real treat. Thank you, Nurdershada for this lovable poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
who wouldn't love this sweet simple senryu. good job, Nudershada!