Grains Of Sand[ 3 Tanka ] Poem by Nudershada Cabanes
Grains Of Sand[ 3 Tanka ]
We are grains of sand
In the shoreline of this life
Small fine grains that breath
We live for just a moment
In the memory of time
Time wash us away
From the shoreline to the sea
Waves bring us farther
Down into the dark ocean
Into its abysmal depth
New sand grains appear
In the shoreline of this life
As new life begins
Like the emergence of spring
That brings renewal to life
© Nudershada M. Cabanes
03.10.2018
A very imaginative write of great depth. The flow and wording are just fantastic. Beautifully crafted write which captures the essence of life.10
Beautiful poem about the new sand which appear in.Life..A thought provoking write
No matter how beautiful the sand. Time respects everyone equally. When beauty is lost, it is soon replaced. and life goes on. A beautiful poem to ponder. Thank you for a great write.
A beautifully lyric poem of mans insignificance in tide and time great piece thanks
New sand grains appear In the shoreline of this life As new life begins....This magnificent poems flies by the wings of hope! A great composition dear poetess! Top score and to my favorite!
Small fine grains that breath We live for just a moment In the memory of time. do u believe in rebirth.... grain washed away reached the depths of the sea and then reappear on the shores............. is it rebirth or reincarnation? ? thank u dear poetess. tony
Mesmerizing Tanka (3) , most beautiful, Nudershada! I am so impressed by your words as: We are grains of sand In the shoreline of this life...Excellent metaphors must I say. I have revisited this poem. Thank you so much for creating. A 10 and much much more!
This poem uses the metaphor of sand to show how we exist.
Bri is right about 'breathe'. Still, three tankas that compare people to grains of sand near the ocean of life. Brilliant extended metaphor.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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We are grains of sand In the shoreline of this life.... We live for just a moment In the memory of time Truth of life. Loved this, goes into my favorite list of poems.10 +