The Lyrics Of The Life, Incomplete. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

The Lyrics Of The Life, Incomplete.

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Who wrote the script?
Who fashioned everything like this?

The sea with waves
And the land with dust.

The moon, the sun and the galaxy
The night with hidden mystery.

The day so bright with light
All naked and transparent.

The heart so sensitive
And mind so loud.

When the life is on track
Why love drifts it away?

When love is blooming
Why heart breaks it away?

If you think that's the right place
When you reach its not there

The song of life is unsung
The lyrics, incomplete.

Monday, August 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 31 August 2020

A song incomplete, a poem perfect!

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Sharad Bhatia 31 August 2020

Really appreciable poetry about " Life and invisible God. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem 100++

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Varsha M 31 August 2020

There is no answer to this question but patience overrules to bring best always. Beautiful words.

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Kezia Kezia 01 September 2020

Beautiful lines...thanks for sharing

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Anjandev Roy 31 August 2020

The song of life is unsung.......fabulous write......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Deepak S S 07 September 2020

Very well conceived and presented. enjoyed reading it

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Michael Jack 03 September 2020

Yes song of the life is always unsung and lyrics will remain incomplete.

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S H 02 September 2020

Awesome poem. Nicely written

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Rajnish Manga 01 September 2020

An amazing poem with a philosophical complexion. The queries are quite legitimate and are in public domain for ages without a plausible answer. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 September 2020

When the life is on track Why love drifts it away? When love is blooming Why heart breaks it away? ......great write; life is life; always incomplete; if someone thinks that after getting this, this and this s/he will be settled but this is an illusion; a mirage, a superb glittered fascination hankers after this life; this life never can complete everything; it runs to catch the blooming flower but in reaching that will be withered; the lyric of this won't be complete....

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