The Line Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

The Line

Rating: 5.0


The line I drew
becoming shorter and shorter
as I become older and older.

Saturday, August 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 26 August 2018

Akham, such an excellent write....10++++

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Tom Allport 20 September 2018

A life line poem that seems to contract with age? , .........well penned Akham

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 September 2018

Growing up! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2018

It will become a dot in course of time and vanish with me........so touching and true. A beautiful philosophical poem on life and death nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 August 2018

A nice poem with a great message hidden in it. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 26 August 2018

Mini poem with a mega revelation. Life and death nicely articulated. Thank you, Dear Poet.

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