The Pond Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

The Pond

Rating: 4.9


Water in the pond drying
For it turned into vapors.
In a few days
No water will be there.
Yet the clouds seen
At the distance turned away
To other directions.
In the shallow water
Of the pond
Fishes are seen
Swimming here and there.
But oh Clouds,
Where you have flown!

The Pond
Saturday, October 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hopelessness,exploitation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 October 2015

The deplorable state of anxiety and hopelessness is well depicted in the poem. An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. A lovely piece bristling with knowledge. Thanks for sharing Akham. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 October 2015

drought.. one of the worst calamities.. thanks for sharing, Akham blessings

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Omar Eldamsheety 11 October 2015

nice poem. what is the message.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 October 2015

very powerful observation dear Poet. very nice poem. we poets perceive. power of perception is a gift of God. tha nkyou tony

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Daya Nandan 21 January 2016

death is inevitable for every life form, .. great write..10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 November 2022

Top score for this insightful poem with a powerful message to the humanity.Thank you dear Poet. To my favourite as well.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 November 2022

A wonderful poem Akham ji. Just cannot imagine a state when there is no water on earth. The world would be devastated.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2022

This is a great little poem of perpetual value!

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Bharati Nayak 05 February 2022

Pond is drying.....Clouds turned to other direction----There is no hope of refilling ---Life is just sustaing! A great poem.It is not only the pond, even our lives become dry and die when we find no hope of refilling.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 January 2022

In a few days No water will be there. Yet the clouds seen At the distance turned away to other directions.......the poet has left enough substances for its readers to ponder on. A meaningful composition. It gives me immense pleasure revisit this poem multiple times.

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