The Greatest Failure Poem by Sarah Maria Sajith

The Greatest Failure

Rating: 5.0


Of the greatest fear of all
Lies within the 'loss'.
That great many people
Will surrender its wealth
The fear gets you
To seek out 'fate' far
Beyond the 'truth'
The word of greatest power
To seize the coward, and
To awake the 'great' stronger
For the greatest shows no mercy
Far more than he gives himself.

For the greatest fear of all
Lies within the 'fear'
Fears of rising, shining,
Gaining, moving, waking.
We the hidden figure
Behind the hidden mask
Only to stir our head
For the greatest failure.

Saturday, May 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: failure,fear
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'fear' is for losing something.
and it leads you to 'failure' which sometimes we cant get out from.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 May 2017

just read and commented on ur poem nd gave u a big 10. if you hve time would u read my poem If you die before me. It is a poem on love. It is simple and easy to read. thank u very much God bless u

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 May 2017

For the greatest fear of all Lies within the 'fear' Fears of rising, shining, Gaining, moving, waking..... behind the hidden mask. fear is a psychological sickness. only way to conquer is faith in Jesus the Christ, the saviour of mankind......... that is the way i conquer all my fears. tony

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