The Circle Poem by Sarah Maria Sajith

The Circle

Rating: 5.0


Ahem; a silly circle to take
A silly way to gear
The times of memories
Has ever got to you to 'REPEAT'
To earn them rather than
To screw down and shut
Rather of it all
Its become my destiny
To spent each day re-
Repeating the fate of you
So not to bloom on Earth
I know, but to bloom
On heaven, I suppose
To search the lights of 'wonder'
Till the end but no end to see.

Friday, May 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lifespan
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the life just goes on even when we know that its gonna be difficult.
and it just sucks.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2017

but to bloom On heaven, I suppose To search the lights of 'wonder' Till the end but no end to see. going through difficulties, facing it with a courageous heart, being hopeful always..... thank yu for conveying positive notes even when every thing seems to be dark.. thank u dear poetess..tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 May 2017

So not to bloom on Earth I know, but to bloom On heaven, To search the lights of 'wonder' Till the end Very nice imagination and the proper use of words conveying a lot of inner joy. this is what i ask myself whenever i read you. What did i get after reading your poem. I would say inner joy, , , , , , tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2017

A nice philosophical start. Thanks

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