The Flower Poem by Varsha M

The Flower

Rating: 5.0


Simple and elegant
It stood stout
On the stem
Clothed in classic
Drawing every specific.

Hovering over it sometime
I smelled the pheromone
Doze a bit
Resting on the petal soft
I desire to continuing right.

Mesmerizing aroma within
Held me dull since then
Dreaming essence
As the soft velvety touch
Pulling me to rest till lunch.

Liquidy sweet nector
Touches my lips upper
I drew a bit
Tasted awesome special
Regained strength full.

Balancing my head over neck
I again tried to pull back
Breaking the spell
Lifting myself high up again
Flapping my wings leading to destination.


Sprinkling all through my way
Every dust stuck my fimbriae
Leaving smile on her face
Seeing her embryo fathom, miles million
Spreading her goodness, expanding her horizon.

The Flower
Saturday, May 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,insect,smelling
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wanted to write how a bee hovers over a flower but then as I wrote I tried to imagine what an insect might be feeling as it is attracted to a flower. Every moment a thought might be there in the insect's mind as it draws nector and fly off leaving flower satisfied.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 17 May 2020

A sweetly scribed poetic expression. I enjoyed it......10+++

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Varsha M 17 May 2020

I feel appropriated as you enjoyed my work. Thank-you sir.

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Vidya Murali 19 May 2020

The poem expresses very deep and absolute feel about the flower... well done Varsha... very brilliant

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Anjandev Roy 30 December 2020

Such a brilliant piece.....

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 21 September 2020

A very delightful and beautiful imagining of a bee's blissful pause upon a bloom. To my List!

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Dipak Adhya 28 July 2020

A picturesque poem.... Well crafted....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 June 2020

Sprinkling all through my way/Every dust stuck my fimbriae....just beautiful! What a beautiful poem! Each line of your poem creates undulation! A magnificent piece of work.......Full score!

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Varsha M 12 June 2020

Thank-you sir for your kind words.

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Pallab Chaudhury 31 May 2020

very nicely penned one..... an outcome of a synthesis of science and arts.... welcome to PH dotcom site! Nice experience to go through some of your works.... hope to see more in future... pc

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Varsha M 31 May 2020

Thank-you sir for your encouraging comments. Yes I'll keep writing.

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