The Beautiful Maiden Poem by Michael Ejire

The Beautiful Maiden

Rating: 4.3


I left a place like oven
That got my tongue cloven

It was a cosmic travel
A trip to heaven

On the street of heaven
I met a beautiful maiden

Her lush voice hushes my fear
Her smile halts my tears

Her presence is like a safe haven
Her beauty like that of heaven

My heart is as big as the earth
Painted like an art

Her heart enveloped in my heart
Like a precious stone enclosed in the earth

Smile for me maiden
Let your smile makes my earth heaven

Fill my heart with thy glory
And all shall be hunky-dory



Dedicated to Glory Oluwabamidele
2019© Ejire Michael

The Beautiful Maiden
Friday, August 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,earth,fear,glory,heart,heaven,maid,smile,tears,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelina Paul 17 August 2019

Her lush voice hushes my fear Her smile halts my tears This is so thrilling! ! !

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Wright John 24 August 2019

Her presence is like a safe haven Her beauty like that of heaven This beautifully written. Keep it up!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2019

Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Rajnish Manga 28 August 2020

A funny narrative poem with fantastic imagery. Thanks.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 August 2020

Me Poet Yeps Poet(8/27/2020 2: 44: 00 PM) On the street of heaven I met a beautiful maiden urrr ssoooooolucyyyy even in heaven u meeet women take some condom(Report) Reply

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 August 2020

Congratulations for this fantastic poem being the POTD.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 August 2020

This is so brilliantly crafted and words so melodious I am speechless, very well scripted 10++

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 August 2020

all physical travelings become fatigue and tired but the traveling of poetic mind is unstoppable; no fatigues can touch it; realistic, natural, spiritual, imaginative travels can make a poet celestial delegate to anywhere of the world, to seen and unseen places; this poem so beautifully and romantically delineated this theme

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 August 2020

Her heart enveloped in my heart Like a precious stone enclosed in the earth.......full of beautiful simile in this poem; excellent poem penned through the exquisite imagination; pleasurable to read this; congrats for being selected this poem again as POD

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Darren Jkoeryo 31 August 2020

Me Poet Yeps Poet says On the street of heaven I met a beautiful maiden urrr ssoooooolucyyyy even in heaven u meeet women take some condom

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