Sufi Just Whirled Poem by Sumita Jetley

Sufi Just Whirled

Rating: 5.0


A sufi never explained, he just whirled,
In ecstatic motion, his soul unfurled.
In a trance, he swirled and spun,
A dance of the heart, the only one.

With each turn, he left the world behind,
And journeyed to a place within his mind.
A place of peace, love, and unity,
A place where he was free to be.

No words could express the beauty he felt,
As he whirled and spun, his heart would melt.
The rhythm of the universe in his veins,
A cosmic dance, with no need for chains.

In the whirl, he found the divine,
A place of oneness, where all combine.
A sufi never explained, he just whirled,
In this dance of life, his heart was unfurled.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
He disappeared when He appeared
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pallavi Tripathi 11 April 2023

A writer never explains(sometimes they do) they just write

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2023

A magnificent poem rhyming well. My favourite lines, 'No words could express the beauty he felt/As he whirled and spun, his heart would melt/The rhythm of the universe in his veins/A cosmic dance, with no need for chains. '

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