Something Moved Poem by heather sweeting

Something Moved

Rating: 4.8


The crack of a twig, the twitch of a tail,
Something moved on the jungle trail.
Crickets chirped in the warm night air,
And all the time, something else was there.
Moonbeams played on a tawny back,
Well hidden on that jungle track.
A man walked watchfully along the path,
In one hand a rifle in the other his staff.
Eyes looked around unblinking and bright,
And something moved in the shadows that night.
A hovering paw, a lithe silhouette,
To leap..To strike? Not yet, not yet...
The man, sensing movement, froze then turned,
Two amber eyes in the darkness burned.
Claws were extended and sheathed again,
Paws gently tested familiar terrain.
Crouching and poised four eyes were still,
Two wary hunters, both ready to kill!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I like to try to add some sense of fear and suspense to a verse.... send a chill down one's spine!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guy Lip-more 11 September 2012

Very well written, great poem.

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Valerie Dohren 11 September 2012

Great story, very well written.

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John Brown 11 September 2012

I enjoyed this Heather. A fine, well written piece.

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