Silent Presence Poem by Freni Karaluthara

Silent Presence

Rating: 4.8


In my silent chat with
flowers plants and trees.
In my lonely wanderings
in silent valleys and atop hills;
Thou! O' Silent Presence, follow me.
Lillies, roses and jasmins fill 'Your Thoughts'
in their silent speech.
Why I love flowers, plants, trees,
and mountains you know?
In their silence i sense His presence.
In cemeteries and Libraries,
in their silence, I'm in bliss,
with the dead and living dead.
The sweetest sights of all time for me
are images in the mirrors.
They roar and shout,
in their silent voices.
Statues of every kind and
arts are pleasing sights for me.
The dwelling of my God is
there in all these, in the-
'Muteness' of this world.

Silent Presence
Tuesday, September 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 September 2015

O’ Silent Presence, follow me. In their silence i sense His presence. in their silence, I’m in bliss, The dwelling of my God is there in all these, .... You are a great 'God_poet, a divine one. that is the beauty of your poems. it is a sense that grows in you as you opt for silence evermore. Go on and be in silence. it is a marvellous experience and it will make out of you a great divine poet. meditate, think, write and smile as you write. God bless you. tony

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Bharati Nayak 12 May 2023

Wow----Such a lovely poem! Nature speaks silently and you feel Almighty in this silence.

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Thanks dear Nayak

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 February 2019

In my lonely wanderings in silent valleys and atop hills; Thou! O' Silent Presence, follow me. Lillies, roses and jasmins fill " Your Thoughts" in their silent speech. From nature to the Almighty One, from the beauty your soul is elevated.... to the heights.....thank u for your spirituality dear Freni. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 January 2019

A lovely poem replete with imagery! I sincerely appreciate the spiritual message inbuilt in this sublime piece of poetry! Full marks

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Freni Karaluthara 25 January 2019

I thank you from my heart for the sincere appriciation on poem.

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Sranisha Francis 25 September 2015

Beautiful exprations........... Well done........... Lillies, roses and jasmins fill “Your Thoughts” in their silent speech.

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Sranisha Francis 24 September 2015

In their silence i sense His presence. These words are very beautiful................

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Freni Karaluthara 24 September 2015

Thank you for your nice commets...

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Freni Karaluthara 24 September 2015

thanks sranisha.....

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