A Journey Under The Spiritual Shades Poem by Freni Karaluthara

A Journey Under The Spiritual Shades

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A JOURNEY UNDER THE SPIRITUAL SHADES

I took a few tender rustling steps,
on the road not taken by many.
The journey grows beneath the sun and moon,
and the road lies long unexplored.
The foot-prints of many seers,
lies faded and half-faded.
I made an attempt to keep pace with them.
Every half step is interpreted in volumes.
My heart found it hard to cope with-
those mighty travel accounts.

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Every tree I saw on wayside-
had an embracing canopy.
And each stretched its hands of shade-
to the tender steps of mine, in spiritual journey.
They protected my steps in slough of sin.
Those trees nestled me in love,
were all motherly invariable.
Each had its ravishing lullaby-
sung in chorus with the gentle breeze,
the birds of every branch,
with their nestling.
III
The tree of Faith found on a pile,
was one sheltered me first.
It nourished and trained me
to trust God's providence and care.
I carried a tang of the fruits of Faith,
in my heart and travelled like a lone wolf,
to the Tree of Hope and its unseen fruits.
It brought me up to this day,
to hope for the fruits of salvation.
I sowed a seed of Hope in my heart,
and went to the nest tree.
The Tree of love, that-
tantalized me to love God,
myself and others.
And I continued my journey.
IV
A Love-Tree, the queen tree,
kept me close to her,
to her spiritually refreshing canopy.
She smiled at me.
It flowered in my heart and soul,
in hundreds and thousands.
The spiritual flower in her,
the core of every spiritual tree,
the heart was behind all these.
The branch of love showered
up on me a thousand flowers.
The branch of mercy ten thousand,
and the one of acceptance,
another hundred thousand.
And the branches:
of the loving presence, the loving concern,
the kind admonitions, the motherly care,
each showered on me,
not thousands but uncountable flowers.
Come Mother and Mistress of Carmel,
The dame queen of heaven,
guide us to walk our way to our LORD,
under the shades of those graceful trees.

A Journey Under The Spiritual Shades
Tuesday, September 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soul Watcher 08 September 2015

The poem and the photo are incredible. Thanks for sharing

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Prabir Gayen 21 February 2019

So beautifully written...nice poem 10++++++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2019

A Love-Tree, the queen tree, kept me close to her, to her spiritually refreshing canopy. She smiled at me....fascinating poetic expression! An elegant piece of poetry....10

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Freni Karaluthara 25 January 2019

Thank you dear Dillip for visting my page, reading my poem and kindly commenting on it. thank you for the encourageing comment.

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Sranisha Francis 24 September 2015

The Tree of Faith found on a pile, was one sheltered me first. Yes You see faith in everything very good.

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Sranisha Francis 16 September 2015

The journey grows beneath the sun and moon, and the road lies long unexplored. yes it is really true, The sun and Moon will pass away. But the longing for the Lord remains!

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Freni Karaluthara 07 December 2016

Thanks Anisha reading my poem

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Kelly Kurt 08 September 2015

A wonderful poem, Freni. Thanks!

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Freni Karaluthara 07 December 2016

Thanks that you were kind to read my Poem and comment on it.

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Freni Karaluthara 07 December 2016

thanks for your kind words kelly kurt

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