'She Took My Heart - Still In Search Of Her' Poem by Sahil Bangotra

'She Took My Heart - Still In Search Of Her'

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Once came a girl, like a butterfly.
Neither she knew me,   nor did I.
But what had happened
Is fault of her eye...! !
Those beautiful eyes just took my heart....! ! ! ! !

Inspite of that attitude,
She had that correctitude.
But what I liked the most,
Was her choice to be solitude.
That behaviour of her just took my heart.....! ! ! ! ! !

Deadly was her dimply smile,
Decent was her hairstyle.
Like others I too wished,
To walk with her atleast a mile.
That style of her just took my heart.....! ! ! ! !

She could never be mine, i supposed.
But the very next day she proposed
The unexpected feeling made me hear
A music very softly composed.
Her way of proposing just took my heart.....! ! ! ! ! !


We both were enjoying in bliss
Then she made a sweet wish
She came closer to me
And we were about to kiss.
That fragrance of her just took my heart.....! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

And  then i woke up
My dream just broke up
Neither was she nor that kiss
I felt my heart broken up.
Her incredible way of broking my heart took my heart too..! ! ! ! !

      '': (WE  NEVER MET: (''

Tuesday, February 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Atria 03 April 2021

Awesome

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Naila Rais 05 December 2018

Oh....... Amazing dream.. ...10 You may like to read my poems too.. Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2018

such a beauty young poet you know it at the end you gave it a turn after a kiss into a dream she will scream and come again it happens to all young ones in a similar vein @77 I still young remain will she not come again I ask myself WHY NOT MAN..she will and must kiss comes as a trust

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Aditya Gupta 08 March 2015

nice work, sahil, didnot know you did english poetry. this is a pleasant surprise.. keep up the good work

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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2015

A lovely train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a beautiful love poem. A nice piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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