Senryu - A Gift Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - A Gift

Rating: 5.0


life cycle- God's gift
pollution- a human's gift
rainbow- nature's gift

Wednesday, October 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lifespan,photograph
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 21 October 2020

Very well thought. Good Senryu.5*

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Deepak S S 21 October 2020

Life, pollution and rainbow all three fantastic.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 21 October 2020

life cycle- God's gift pollution- a human's gift rainbow- nature's gift

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 October 2020

Vah Asim sahab, the message is clear

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Gordon Walter 22 October 2020

Excellent poem ife cycle- God's gift pollution- a human's gift rainbow- nature's gift

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Kostas Lagos 21 October 2020

Pollution- a human's gift. What a gift! Good senryu!

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Kostas Lagos 21 October 2020

Pollution- a uman's gift. What a gift! Good senryu!

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Suzon Albert 21 October 2020

How much do we value our gift depends on us.5*

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Ricky Manhatten 21 October 2020

Message very clear. Nicely written

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