Relationship Better... Poem by Varsha M

Relationship Better...

Rating: 5.0


Memories are treasure
Store house of pleasure
Fun in greater measure
Fights in miniature
For, by now, mature
Discover, the creature
Bigger than fight feature
Mending bonds like Souvenir
Of relationship better.

Friday, December 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: memories,relationship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Rose Marie Juan Austin poem memories...

Tried the rhyme rhythm
Mostly full rhyme
Mixture of iambic and trochee and spondee and pyrrhic meter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 19 December 2020

Thanks for your experiments with poetry. Fill it with heart dear. memories will be the treasure bond"

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 December 2020

A well crafted opus.... Truly delightful and heartwarming......5 stars*****...Bernard

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