Recalling The Past Poem by valentin savin

Recalling The Past

Rating: 5.0


RECALLING THE PAST
I recall my childhood as fairytale,
As sweet music in its chime.
My boyish pastime shining pale -
The dreaming glow of a distant time.

But where did that childhood go?
The dream is gone, and mom was gone!
But memory's the last resort, though -
Childhood moment helped me return.
05.05.2006
March 2019

Monday, March 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dream time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Flooded memories, dreams, childhood.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 13 September 2019

Visiting yesterday makes one’s mind recall many things, including childhood. A delightful poem, sir Velentin...10+++

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Valentin Savin 13 September 2019

Thank you very much, dear Bernard, for your nice comment.

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Bri Edwards 06 May 2019

i loved my childhood, but i'm not sure i realized it until decades later. things started to go 'down hill' once i had homework to do for school. ; ( i would return to it (childhood, not homework) if i were guaranteed i'd never outgrow it. some might say now that i never did outgrow it. bri :)

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valentin savin 07 May 2019

You are sure to be childlike and never outgrow it.

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Bri Edwards 06 May 2019

some may read your responses to my comment and think i'm REALLY a bad boy! ! ! : ((((((((((((((((( bri

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Bri Edwards 04 April 2019

" Childhood moment helped me return." & (from Poet's Notes) " Flooded memories" let me guess: i CAN put one and one together and get THREE. You wet your bed again, didn't you? well, you ARE 80 years old, after all. I won't tell (too many people) . to MyPoemList bri :))))))

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Valentin Savin 07 April 2019

Bri, are you sure, you are happy writing sh.t on my page?

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Valentin Savin 06 April 2019

As far as I can tell, you didn't like the poem and resented it. I can put two and two together and get five. Yes, I am over eighty years old. But that doesn't mean you can write about me and measure me in your way. My years are my wealth, my friend in need.

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