Poetic Inspiration Poem by Jazib Kamalvi

Poetic Inspiration

Rating: 4.8


Is it anger or is it disgust?
Is it of love or a pose of lust?

I astonish why you never turn?
Am I wrong or my complaint is just?

Though it is match yet is not a play.
Life is serious not haphazard way.

Thouh it seems yet, it is not a fact.
You are made of neither ash nor clay.

Poetic Inspiration
Monday, May 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the picture pose of Louemile Rosch Mangulabnan.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A poem that lingers in memory for long for it has been beautifully crafted.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 September 2020

Dear Nair! Thank you so much for your kind words.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 June 2020

'Life is serious not haphazard way' - yes, true!

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 June 2020

Dear Poet! Your words are really precious for me. Thank you so much.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2019

A nice poem sort of philosophical drop. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing. Loved it.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 October 2019

Dear Anil! Thank you so much for the lovely comment.

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Bri Edwards 25 August 2019

i really don't understand it. : ( bri

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 August 2019

Something wrong with you. You may like to read the comment of Kostas Lagos. Thanks

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Kostas Lagos 20 August 2019

A poem worth of reading many times!

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 August 2019

Dear Kostas Lagos! Thank you so much for your kind words.

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