My girl would you go with me,
in an alley, where solitude blooms?
I feel your love in stealthy glance,
in the quietly burning candle in my soul.
'Go with me', I speak to your soul.
I hide my grief in pondered verse.
Unnoticed I weep in fine allegory,
which I choose to speak to the world.
When I feel shunned and lonely
tread by my side close to me
Take away the burden of my soul,
console and make me laugh again.
My girl I see through your eyes,
the world with its magical beauty.
Singing of birds, enchanting streams,
glory of flowers, splendor of nature.
Full 5 Stars and many more for this wonderful poem. Keep writing such heartful poems. To my Fav list.
To imagine and write is wonderful way of expression, I fell in love with poesy long back and I find many similarities in this poem. Well done, my deepest thanks to M. Asim Nehal who showed me the way to this poem - My love Poesy.
Dear Sheeya Hacks, Your encouragement and support mean a lot to me, and I am truly touched by your words. Thank you for taking the time to express your thoughts.
Dear Sheeya Hacks, I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude for your kind and thoughtful words. It truly warms my heart to know that you appreciated my poem and that you share a love for poesy as well.
I came to read your poem after reading translation By Dr. M. Asim Nehal, this poem surely deserves recognition for two reasons, first your imagination to make your Poem a girl and then to express your thoughts through it. I suppose you wrote this poem during COVID times.
Respected Sir, I am delighted to read your words of appreciation in the comment box. I am also extremely grateful to Dr. M. Asim Nehal for translating the poem into Hindi, thus enabling it to reach a wider audience. Thank you very much.
A brilliant poem, from a most talented poet. personifying the poesy and Addressing the poesy as one's lover is an absolute brilliant idea. This makes the poem extraordinarily beautiful
I liked your poesy. The way you thought about poem is unique and wonderful. I give you 5 Stars for this and by the way I read it's Hindi version first hence I thank the translator here as well.
Dear Darren Jkoeryo, I wanted to express my sincere gratitude for your kind words and appreciation of my poem. Your feedback brings me lots of happiness.