Parallel Streams Poem by Vaibhav Simha

Parallel Streams

Rating: 4.7


The ether in murky cloud, a setting for beauty's shroud,
Declared naught but apathy, ere the cosmic pageantry;
For when I was on an elevated bimble, out came the nimble
Footslogging towards the other: two eyes of the deific usher.

A day before the parading spectacles, jostled their sentinels,
Who, perchance or by fate, faced each other on the date:
Both tailed with inferno, intent for wedlock yet adagio;
Like two star-crossed streams, in their fate were no seams.

The world beheld it, though none but I, the exchange anigh.
They saw in it beauty, rarity, novelty, and, a few, serendipity,
But in those moments, I espied a war betwixt torments
And tidings: there's no beauty in just beauty—sweet musings!

Two parallel streams missed their confluent dreams,
Their water, fiery gleams: in darkness, striking leams;
A shadow of the surfeit wells that are Dual happy hells.
This vying between alps and dells truly beauty sells.

No deep, no hollow comes without our minds shallow;
No farm nor fallow arises without us being humanly callow.
For the grace and glitter of the former is set in the latter:
This truth makes no ridge flatter, for this forms life's matter.

Tuesday, December 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is inspired from a celestial event that I was fortunate enough to descry on December 12,2020, while I was ambling on the roof (elevated bimble, as I call it in my poem) . The event was a head-on crossing of two celestial bodies in the evening sky, just a day before the real 'spectacle' or 'cosmic pageantry', the Geminids Meteor Shower.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 December 2020

no hollow comes without our minds shallow; No farm nor fallow arises without us being humanly callow. shallow fallow callow good rhyming but who here has the capacity to you follow at least ole pall i am shallow let me remain mellow you may follow and glow beyond all those who here are hollow For the grace and glitter of the former is set in the latter: This truth makes no ridge flatter, for this forms life's matter.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2020

It's a brilliant poem... fabulous diction. Your last truthful line needs thorough introspection! I find it as a magnificent piece of work.5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Vaibhav Simha 30 December 2020

Thanks for the wondrous comment!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 December 2020

Parallel streams in day to day life and experiences beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.

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